pretty good
this is a good song but i still can feel the same sort of fell in your other goth and rock tracks. if you want to try somthing go to plugin presets and then generators and then fl slayer and there is heaps of modes for slayer. try that and make a bit of a different sound with your tracks. anyway this is a pretty good track. the quality was very nice. the drums are cool but in shabbash and some other goth tracks you have the drum beat is almost exactly the same. try using some hi hats. it would really help it. i also reccomend changing the tempo of your songs becoz a lot of others have the same tempo so change that aswell. also when you go to the slayer plugin dont use the slap bass unless your thinking of making a sort of 'BETRAYAL OF FATE' sort of song(if you dont know betrayal of fate is listen to goukisan, that guy is a master of fl studio) i love the piano at the start. it gives the song a sort of hold on tight! sort of feeling. i also reccomend losing the electro guitar. it makes the song a sort goth song i know but it is kinda old now. it sounded pretty good in shabbash but now i think you need to change guitar.
peace out