Ahhhh, The sweet sound of FL.
Ok, this song is far from perfect, but also far from disaster. A few things,
1st: The Melody was absoloutly fantastic, loved every second of it.
2nd: The claps (i think they were claps) just didnt fit. The synths are swing, and the claps are straight. They dot blend. I have had always had problems with swing music. So i suggest for the finished product make the song straight, not swing.
3rd, The synths you added when the claps came in were i thought to be a bit random. They didnt really fit the melody that was playing, and i gues sort off ruined that bit.
4th: Just a tip for the finished product, You badly need drums. This is a song in need of drums. But dont go Righty then. i'll make one pattern and that will be my beat for the whole thing. NononononononononoNO! You need at least 3 different drum patterns in your piece to make it sound creative. Also for the drums, for a song like this, i think you should look at Fl's Vintage pack (Packs > Vintage) or FL DrumSynth Live for this song.
Well, like i said, its far from perfect, but if you work on these things, it will be musch closer, i can assure you that.
dondrummer :)