Slightly Dissapointed...
The first 20 seconds i was anticipating a fast-paced DnB TRACK, I guess I would say this is a nice sounding Hip-Hop track, but It definitely aint Dnb. The instruments sounded a bit isolated, maybe a punchy bassline might help? Meh. Its alright. :)
People are calling it drum step these day,but i dont think id class this as drum step from,
cool!
The lead was a great fit and same with bass (or was it an organ?), either way great job. May I ask tho, what plugin did you use for the drums?
The Tetris song is repitive, BUT THIS IS AWESOME!
Seriously dude, Tetris doesnt get better then that. Your bass fit perfectly. The 8-bit intro was perfect. Awesome job, big 10
Cheers Don.
overall: okay...
its okay, but things you should improve:
to make a guitar themed song you need to have the guitar more strong and the bass less strong. the drums seem a little to hip hoppish fo this. this is an experiment i understand which have pros:
some of the melodies were outstanding
your bass was great especially layering them over the top of each other, very smart indeed.
overall not to bad, but could use some touch ups.
8/10 3/5
Ah, ok, next song I will try to make the bass more subtle. To be honest I can't use a stronger guitar because I have a bunch of terrible FL built in guitars and there really are no decent free ones I know of, regardless you seemed to really like it so thank you.
WOW
I was thinking whether i should give this an 8 or a 7 at the beginning and then when the drums and bass kicked in i thought a 9 for sure and then the guitar.....mate, it was FLIPPING OUTSTANDING! That was the abosolute stand out of the whole song. You should seriously consider doing a collab with Evil-Dog! You guys ROCK!
Thanks for the review Don.
Ahhhh, The sweet sound of FL.
Ok, this song is far from perfect, but also far from disaster. A few things,
1st: The Melody was absoloutly fantastic, loved every second of it.
2nd: The claps (i think they were claps) just didnt fit. The synths are swing, and the claps are straight. They dot blend. I have had always had problems with swing music. So i suggest for the finished product make the song straight, not swing.
3rd, The synths you added when the claps came in were i thought to be a bit random. They didnt really fit the melody that was playing, and i gues sort off ruined that bit.
4th: Just a tip for the finished product, You badly need drums. This is a song in need of drums. But dont go Righty then. i'll make one pattern and that will be my beat for the whole thing. NononononononononoNO! You need at least 3 different drum patterns in your piece to make it sound creative. Also for the drums, for a song like this, i think you should look at Fl's Vintage pack (Packs > Vintage) or FL DrumSynth Live for this song.
Well, like i said, its far from perfect, but if you work on these things, it will be musch closer, i can assure you that.
dondrummer :)
been a while so yes I would see my mishaps and fix them in time...a lot of time. But yeah thanks for review and help. I'll be sure to work on it slowly and get it done right.
Numa Numa YAY!
Surprisingly i thought it being midi would sound gay but it actually sounded pretty good. The synth and the instruments were brilliant. The only problem is that some of the notes came in a bit late but thats ok. Brilliant Work. You get my 10
thankyou
Your awesome.
If i was to put it briefly then i'd just say that. Just a couple of questions. Where do you get the clapping background noises from? And was this made on FL? Anyway. The synth's were nice and... should i say... jolly? :) Nice job man. The classical buildup was a nice choice. Nice job, 10/10
clapping backround noises? Tell me a time and ill understand more of that your trying to say. Yeah the melody was pretty happy haha and yes, i made it on FL :D. Thanks for the review!
Intro was KICKASS!
The intro and outro were by far the best bits in this song. But its downfall was the middle, the riffs were very plain with no drums that came in until later, and the transitions were either to short ot long. The intro was so Kikass i could listen to it all day. Its so awesome! You made very nice use of the loops and you made a killer intro. I think you could just make the intro again and pass it off as a loop!! :P nice job. 10/10 5/5
Yeah I can easily make it a loop. =]
Thanks very much for your review and rate lol xD
its not to bad, but could use a couple of touchups
almost perfect, just some advice for techno, make sure the drums are nice and loud, often the synth overpowers the drums, also often i found it helps a techno/trance song if you have big bumbing bass covering the lead synth(s), if you use FL8 i can help you out with this. but there isnt muchelse i can criticise. the song itself is good! it just needs some touchups. overall nice job.
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