dondrummer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Punchy]

hey dude!

oohh i feel like dancing! This rocks! Te guitar riff is the best guitar riffi have heard ina long while ( besides from the solos in Living Colour's Cult Of Personality and Dragonforces Revolution Deathsquad, because you knwo, there awesome) just a couple of things that might make this a bit heavier and harder. In the hard parts add some bass and make sure its a powerful one. And if you do that pump the volume on the drums and remove the FX. Those are things that might make this better, but than again might make it worse, so nice work! 10/10 5/5

[Sepian Sky (NW)]

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this song isnt actually that bad.
the intro got me head banging but then when the big synth came in, they didnt match, it felt like they were facing off against each other, if you know what i mean.
they synths you used were very nice, and you used nice use of FX.
the beat was much better to, just expand your knowledge form basic fl drums, it will sound a whole lot better. so yeah.
if you just adjust the synths, this could be anice song.
oh yeah. try and fix the ending. smashing syntsh dont end in a big crash. it sounds kinda strange.

[First Attempt At Rock]

WOW

I was thinking whether i should give this an 8 or a 7 at the beginning and then when the drums and bass kicked in i thought a 9 for sure and then the guitar.....mate, it was FLIPPING OUTSTANDING! That was the abosolute stand out of the whole song. You should seriously consider doing a collab with Evil-Dog! You guys ROCK!

BotonyProduktions responds:

Thanks for the review Don.

[Indifferent Circus (preview)]

Ahhhh, The sweet sound of FL.

Ok, this song is far from perfect, but also far from disaster. A few things,
1st: The Melody was absoloutly fantastic, loved every second of it.
2nd: The claps (i think they were claps) just didnt fit. The synths are swing, and the claps are straight. They dot blend. I have had always had problems with swing music. So i suggest for the finished product make the song straight, not swing.
3rd, The synths you added when the claps came in were i thought to be a bit random. They didnt really fit the melody that was playing, and i gues sort off ruined that bit.
4th: Just a tip for the finished product, You badly need drums. This is a song in need of drums. But dont go Righty then. i'll make one pattern and that will be my beat for the whole thing. NononononononononoNO! You need at least 3 different drum patterns in your piece to make it sound creative. Also for the drums, for a song like this, i think you should look at Fl's Vintage pack (Packs > Vintage) or FL DrumSynth Live for this song.

Well, like i said, its far from perfect, but if you work on these things, it will be musch closer, i can assure you that.
dondrummer :)

Nikowolf responds:

been a while so yes I would see my mishaps and fix them in time...a lot of time. But yeah thanks for review and help. I'll be sure to work on it slowly and get it done right.

[Adamant FX]

wt? how isnt this wicked?

This is wicked man. Can i use it in my flash? If i could it would be much appreciated.
this synths were absoutley sick and you made the drums like, well, wicked! Awesome work. Nice job.

[Punk Solo]

Mixcraft... Oh the good Ol' Days...

Hey man,
Mixcraft... its not a definte plus but its not a minus either. You did make everything sound nice, but with Mixcraft, you have to make YOUR OWN loops. If you use its own loops, and mix it up, it ounds very strange. Listen to my song Breaktime or Pound to see what you can make Mixcraft sound like, but here you did ok with it. The guitar riff was catchy and fun. The Bass made the song flow, which is good, my only concern was your drums. They were good dont get me wrong, but they got a bit repetitive, and the fill from :36 to :44 just wasnt good, to put it briefly. They need to flow better than that. Anyways, you did ok. So you get my 8 and my 4.

[Punk Instrumental]

repetitive but..

For a menu, the repetitive thing is ok.

[Solfire Erotica (NW)]

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Still thinking. This is random, maybe a bit too random. To get your own style, you need to make your own loops, not use FL's pre-made ones. Some of the loops worked, but they wont work for you 4eva. I think for you to make an awesome song, you need your own sound, which unfortunately, you dont have yet.

[-__--__--_numa numa _--__--__-]

Numa Numa YAY!

Surprisingly i thought it being midi would sound gay but it actually sounded pretty good. The synth and the instruments were brilliant. The only problem is that some of the notes came in a bit late but thats ok. Brilliant Work. You get my 10

Alexman159 responds:

thankyou

[DjSc00p - Head Up(Final)]

Your awesome.

If i was to put it briefly then i'd just say that. Just a couple of questions. Where do you get the clapping background noises from? And was this made on FL? Anyway. The synth's were nice and... should i say... jolly? :) Nice job man. The classical buildup was a nice choice. Nice job, 10/10

DjSc00p responds:

clapping backround noises? Tell me a time and ill understand more of that your trying to say. Yeah the melody was pretty happy haha and yes, i made it on FL :D. Thanks for the review!